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Alrighty.
So I really do like this
The lines are smooth
The coloring is neat
Some of the green is going into the white and the blue, like on the shout and ear
But that's accidental, so not a big deal
REALLY like the outline. This is a colorful piece
LOVE the eye
and the outline of the eye
The TIX at the bottom
Is really neat and nicely done
You did REALLY well with this piece.
Really the only thing I can see that you can improve on
Is that there are too many lines in the hair
If your making lines, make them look like the hair is flowing
Let the lines follow the hair
Again, really nice piece
Keep up the great work! C:

Also, the stars may not be accurate lol
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1 out of 1 deviants thought this was fair.

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Xx-Blu-BiotchxX Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Artist

Thank you for the critique :heart:
I know about the hair lines wasn't the best idea eue''
I'm using a "Aqua Marker" instead of a "ProMarker" D||

Unlike the markers i'm using, it shows the strokes, Copic markers dont~
Copic markers are just expensive so i brought something close to it ouo''

Thank you for the tips and I understand about the hair lines eue''~
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CollectionOfWhiskers Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not a problem :heart:
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